Love is a word that cannot be defined.
A word that has an often occurrence,
A word that can’t be summed up in one line,
A word for great comfort and assurance.
A word where if it could last forever,
Would remove most sorrow and all of pain.
At the same time, you would need it never,
As without pain, love would give you no gain.
In this world where everyone passes on,
Love will predictably come to an end,
But, love can have an everlasting bond,
And near nor far, on love you can depend.
Love is a word that cannot be defined,
But love’s a feeling that’s always divine.
3 comments:
Nice poem, Kevdawg. I liked the repitition of, 'a word' because it adds some kind of dramatization to your sonnet. I can't see anything to help improve your sonnet and it flows really well from line to line. You seem to be a very passionate person. Very touching love sonnet!
jeez u sexy guy
writing about love! nah jus jokin. nice sonnet
hoo wow just a little bit sensitive ah? hahah nah but writing about LOVE, i see your taking a higher step into growing up. im proud of you. hahahha nah but your sonnet was soo like you wrote this with passion. are you in love mister kevin? yes i think you are with brent yah? hahah nah im playing but i agree with alex k that you dont really need any changes because it has a nice flowing thing going on and stuff li'dat. but good job man! k shooots.
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